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Post by rorschalk on Sept 8, 2020 17:01:29 GMT
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Post by johnVC on Sept 9, 2020 16:03:54 GMT
Thank you for the Odyssey-like journey that was my first foray into the world of TQR. I must say the experience was both interesting and entertaining (unlike many of my lectures during my 35 years of teaching math).
I have to admit, after I submitted my capital, I looked over your site and immediately developed second thoughts about my capital's chances for success. When I read doomey's original comments in which the main references to my venture were "F*** my A** and revulsion at having been assigned the task of reading my venture, I lost a small part of my soul. Luckily, I'm not currently using it.
I was completely shocked to find my capital terminaled and not instantly terminated. I am very grateful for doomey's follow up message as well as the comments from sturgeon and bulldust. I completely understand and agree with their comments about style (though, I suppose overwrought and stiff could be considered a style). I'm new to the crafting game and know I have many weaknesses, so I will try to put their comments to good use.
I don't know if I will ever craft something good enough to consider submitting again. Although, If I do or I reach the proper state of senility, I am more than willing to take another shot . . . (which now that I think of it, has a double meaning).
Thanks again for putting up with my mediocrity (hopefully).
johnVC
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Post by rorschalk on Sept 9, 2020 16:25:24 GMT
Dear Mr. VC,
TQR endeavors to give you the service of honest feedback (albeit sometimes brutally so) that may benefit a future submission's chances of touching the monkey here or at any other venture aggregating consortium floating somewhere in the flaccid interwebbed ethereal blacktop of the information superhighway. Also, shedding light on the process to instruct and entertain both the VC and the investors so that the whole of it, the kit and the kaboodle, may form a more perfect union, as well as adding some durability to the VCs already pre-thickened skin.
Thus saying, I applaud your tenacity and sagacity with our transparent process and hope that its non-lethal parsimonious predilection have made you able to come back stronger to fight another day.
Best of luck and I look forward to doing business with you in the future.
TQR
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