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Post by rorschalk on Jul 1, 2024 22:59:38 GMT
Hi. Got around to reading thpoe for the final final final dress rehearsal before posting. Was working oF (SIC) what I thought was your final 4th rewrite. Got to the end and had to question whether that was the case and I hadn't accidentally beein (SIC) working from some earlier version. So many versions! Anyhow. It's been a week of rest so I don't feel too bad putting you in this imposition. I also did a few minor edits so it's justified to have you look again, right? The venture capitalist has final say, really is the way it should be. So here:
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Post by johnVC on Jul 1, 2024 23:01:07 GMT
I have attached a reviewed and edited final draft. (The version you just sent, sort of merged with the version I last sent to you).
Please confirm receipt and thanks,
- Adam
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Post by rorschalk on Jul 1, 2024 23:02:16 GMT
Excellent. I'll get it up shortly. Pun intended.
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Post by johnVC on Jul 1, 2024 23:05:10 GMT
Well played (the pun!)
Thanks!
ten hours laterI am excited to see THPOE up at tqrstories.com/
However the version that is up, is not the latest version I recently sent you.
I am very much okay if you don't want to use that version, but e.g. there were some Spanish accent marks that I corrected in the latest version and other small changes.
If it's not too complicated, I'd like to request your consideration for replacing the current version with this final version.
If it is complicated, I am very grateful and thank you (and accent marks be darned),
Thanks for everything,
- Adam |
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Post by rorschalk on Jul 1, 2024 23:07:28 GMT
Was it just the spanish accents? It may be that they don't translate into bravenet's interface
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Post by johnVC on Jul 1, 2024 23:08:17 GMT
No, I'm afraid it's multiple edited items throughout the piece, in addition to the accents.
(For example, the posted story has the old ending, not the back-and-forth re-edited ending we worked on.)
Attached is the latest version,
- Adam
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Post by rorschalk on Jul 1, 2024 23:10:04 GMT
All right. I'll paste this one in.
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Post by johnVC on Jul 1, 2024 23:11:10 GMT
Thanks.
I'm very appreciative of that.
-Adam
(PS: FYI, it still hasn't pasted in yet, the new one, attached to this email and other recent emails, either that, or for some reason, it's reverted.)
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Post by rorschalk on Jul 1, 2024 23:13:15 GMT
I pasted the one in that you gave me last night and haven't touched it since. I don't know what else to tell ya. It's unfortunate.
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Post by johnVC on Jul 1, 2024 23:14:53 GMT
But they don't match. The original one from before remains up somehow now.
Could you please check on this?
(I will waive my $50 in return for this favor. I really do like the final version much better.
No contractions, better accent marks, other multiple differences.)
(Attached again is the final version.)
Sorry to be a bother, and thanks,
- Adam
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Post by rorschalk on Jul 1, 2024 23:17:05 GMT
Sure thing. The most important thing is to get it right. Let me know if that's right now.
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Post by johnVC on Jul 1, 2024 23:18:29 GMT
It’s perfect now - thanks!
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