PISS GIRL rcvd, rejected

PISS GIRL rcvd, rejected May 1, 2023 19:02:29 GMT

Post by rorschalk on May 1, 2023 19:02:29 GMT

Dear Ms. VC,

Big points for the line: Hopefully it's not crapitol. For as you grokked from the guidelines, I am a sucker for venture capitalists who use the lingo particular to the TQR space. That is why it pains me to have to reject this venture before it even gets inside and up onto the mountaintop where the great Lama Rockefeller now presides and casts his judgment down upon the VC in the lowlands as critical thunderbolts from on high. Had you been consistent with your TQRspeak throughout the introduction (see the words italicized in the text you sent) then that 100 percent adherence to the lingo would probably have been able to override the short reveal of plot summary, the kind of intro that I will, more often than not, abhor.

Free Market

PISS GIRL rcvd, rejected

Post by janeVC on May 1, 2023 18:43:58 GMT

Post by rorschalk on May 1, 2023 19:02:29 GMT