Post by rorschalk on Jan 22, 2023 23:32:53 GMT
Hello Marco,
I apologize for making this process sofa king loooong, but going through your capital gain today, I ended up making some edits that I think improve it a bit. If you could read it through and let me know what will and won't work for you, I'd be much obliged. Also, I have to say it took me a while to "get" the ending. I didn't quite get it until this day's run through. I think some of the edits I made toward the end there really made the meaning pop through even more better than it had before. Like I said, let me know. I think this is a great venture and want to present it as good as it can be.
I apologize for making this process sofa king loooong, but going through your capital gain today, I ended up making some edits that I think improve it a bit. If you could read it through and let me know what will and won't work for you, I'd be much obliged. Also, I have to say it took me a while to "get" the ending. I didn't quite get it until this day's run through. I think some of the edits I made toward the end there really made the meaning pop through even more better than it had before. Like I said, let me know. I think this is a great venture and want to present it as good as it can be.
